Every Good Boy Deserves Fudge

Every Good Boy Deserves Fudge

9 chapters / 2192 words

Approximately 11 minutes to read

Description:

(FINISHED Short Film, Fourth Edit Draft) An interesting girl meets another interesting girl on a bridge, they have an interesting story. There's also an interesting boy that doesn't think he's very interesting at all. *The MC is based and named after one of my friends.* **Started in late Sept 2016** ***Cover beautifully done by the lovely Grace Meredith)

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5 months ago MaxVor said:

Immediately when you start the program ShowBox appear in the new movies. You can see the history of previously viewed your favourite films and re-watch the movie.

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6 months ago M. ALoysIus danKO [maliko] said:

I'm with A.N. Lewis. Can only see the author's info. You'll have to let me know if you figure it out so we can swap. I like to swap. ^_^

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7 months ago A. N. Lewis said:

Hey, you asked for a swap, but I'm having trouble reading the script. I can only see the author's info. Is there another page I'm supposed to go to? I'd love to read what you have!

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8 months ago Aly Heckeroth said:

It was such a good writing.I think that you should make another one based on how Johnathon reacts afterwards, and how his life changed. Since you asked me to tell you why I liked it, I will. I think that you developed everything quite nicely. You made me attached to Sage on the third page (second of story). Even though I figured that she was going to die, I didn't want her to. I wanted Sage to live, and do the good things that she would have done. Thank you for inviting me to read this AWESOME story.

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8 months ago sonyawilson21 said:

I think the first part I read was great, but there were a few mistakes. I'm interested in reading some more. Keep it up!

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8 months ago Maddy Melville said:

In 1 scene his should be is ion first paragraph.