Love Me So

Love Me So

3 chapters / 1384 words

Approximately 7 minutes to read

Description:

SHORT STORY || Contemporary Drama || COMPLETED « She had a bulging backpack slung on her back, a thick winter coat wrapped around her, and tears frozen in her eyes. It was Christmas Eve, and she had run away.


Entry for the Home for the Holidays Contest 2016.
FEATURED: Stormie McNeal | Featured Story and another coming soon. :D
Beautiful cover by the beautiful Elizabeth Blair.
This piece is copyright Irene Grey 2017. It may not be reproduced or copied without direct permission from me.

Comments(11)

Aliceb5 (1)

7 months ago Coral Vaci said:

This story is simply marvelous, super sad and intense! You have written this amazingly! Keep up the amazing work!!! :D

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11 months ago a n n a b e t h said:

This is so sad!! I love how you ended it though. Will you write a sequel?

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11 months ago Haley Kissell said:

Awwww! I was so worried about Holly after he jumped into the stream! Your cliffhangers were fabulous and your story came full circle. Very nice!

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11 months ago Millieron D. Emile said:

Amazing!!!

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6 months ago Scarlett rivers said:

This is so beautiful. Most of the time when there is a ten running away they make it seem like the teen thinks nobody cares about them the whole world is out to get them and things like that. but you have this whole other perspective. I love this book.

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9 months ago Lillie Caroline said:

I wish I found this sooner! This story was so short, yet you managed to elicit such strong feelings. I loved how, before Holly jumped into the water, you shortened the text to just dialogue between her and her mom. It left more of an impact than it would have otherwise. :)

I honestly almost cried. Thank you for not killing Holly, haha.