The White Circle Society(part 1)

The White Circle Society(part 1)

1 chapter / 769 words

Approximately 4 minutes to read

Description:

Five unique girls form a friendship after a little adventure comes to their lives.

Comments(1)

Flower- forgetmenot

9 months ago This is my childhood said:

I think your story is quite hard to follow plot wise.

Reviews(2)

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10 months ago adiedo said:

I feel like you have a general idea of what is going to happen in your story, but maybe you don't really know what the story is going to be about you. They might travel to a magical place and save the world or something, but what is it going to be about. What is the lesson the reader is going to take away from this. You also seem to be jumping around a bit and it is a bit hard to get a solid grasp of what's going on. My advice is to just keep plotting, writing, taking notes, and eventually your story will develop. Don't give up. :)

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10 months ago Ysabelle Lianne said:

It's nice, but somehow not quite understandable. No offense in there. Maybe you should put this: ------------- In every new story. Like for Virgin's, Amanda's, Sonny's, etc. But it was nice! Amazing!