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she held the moon in her hands, but all he saw was darkness.
**everything's lowercase for a reason! and I know I have grammar mistakes, but my poetry is mainly about the content/feelings vs. the grammar!**
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3 months ago Eden said:
I read all of the poems and enjoyed all of them. My favorite ones were the first and last poems. I loved the transition from each poem, as if they are all stages of love and life. The flow of all the poems was good. I didn't see any grammar mistakes or anything. I think you did a really good job at telling the story behind the poem.