Silver Reign Acting Club

Silver Reign Acting Club

1 chapter / 1475 words

Approximately 7 minutes to read

Description:

A special short story about friendship and acting.

Comments(2)

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10 months ago adiedo said:

This is a cute story. I'm one of the people that absolutely loves and values friendship haha so this was a nice read. I would only suggest you include more sensory details. It makes the story flow better as opposed to jumping around. :)

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10 months ago Stormie "Ducky" McNeal said:

This is good in so many ways I JUST CAN'T EVEN.

I do know that starting off with dialogue as your first line USUALLY isn't the best idea. Just a heads up.

I love your story; I can't wait to see if you get in!

Reviews(3)

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10 months ago Nicole Enyart said:

This is a very charming story. And very relatable, as I remember having similar problems. I think the characters you have can be related to by anyone. I really liked the tie in with the beginning quote and ending it with it. A friendly suggestion. Try not to tell so much in your story. You don't want to do the work of the reader. For instance, instead of saying "the new rich kid" you could use things to describe her as being rich. Have the reader make their own judgment on that. Happy writing!

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10 months ago Aiden P said:

I love the meaning of this story and how true it can be!