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12 days ago NF Christine said:
Alrighty! So, this was really good! I can understand that this is about a long distance relationship. It seems like they fell in love over the phone- by texting each other. There are a few confusments that I had though...
I got the two impressions that either one of them left the other and NOW they talk over the phone, then the other impression that they had NEVER met each other.
Maybe just explain that part a little bit more.
A few long sentences that could be broken down...
Overall- really good!
You could probably even turn this into a short romance if you wanted :)