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A collection of short stories and other things
*~*The story in this collection changes from time to time to get different feedback. There will be a notice in the comments/review section when that happens. Thanks*~*
25 days ago Nick Meraglio said:
I felt it was a good beginning it kept me interested for more
29 days ago Courtney Dozier said:
I can also totally relate because sometimes I reflect on like life and everything and other people just don't understand. Perhaps being crazy is what we should be. That's the message you got across here - that everything is relative. We think being crazy is bad because it's different and people don't act normal, but maybe in reality being normal is what's wrong. This was short but really cool! I hope you continue it!
about 1 month ago Ritu said:
That was a really awesome story. There was a little punctuation problems. At least I think so. Anyways great book. Let me know when there is more.
about 1 month ago On The Verge Of Insanity said:
love your book. I didn't find anything that needs to be fixed really. I love the plot and it's just, perfect!
10 days ago Erin said:
Hey, sorry it took so long for me to start the swap, it's been crazy busy for me and now I finally have a free day.
It's a good beginning, that's for sure. It's a little too short to tell what's going on, but it looks like it's heading in the right direction. You leave a lot open in the story, which in this case is good. It leaves the reader wanting to know more, wanting to know why he's dubbed as so crazy. I know this is the beginning, but make sure you specify the names and looks of the characters.
Overall, great job :)
16 days ago Dominic D. said:
Your book description says "collection of short stories and other things," but right now there is only one story, one chapter. Do you plan on adding more? If so, shouldn't you wait until you have more to put it up at all?
I am not against the use of strong language entirely. I am not sure however that it was a good choice here, so strong and so soon. It's hard to make a sure call on this one though, since we are given so little in this chapter.
At the same time however, we did get to learn somethings, and perhaps a lot. Why is he speaking with a psychologist? There are guards outside the room; apparently he is dangerous? I will not say there it is a bad chapter, but do you mean for it to stand alone?
I might read the rest of this book, if there is more of it, but I can't be sure. I recommend using the description section to "give a description" of the work so the readers know what they are getting into.
Best of luck. God bless. Write on! etc.