Born on the Bayou

Born on the Bayou

4 chapters / 854 words

Approximately 4 minutes to read

Description:

A southern boy grows up in a harsh swampy environment and has to find a way to survive.

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Im southern bred

about 1 month ago Dakota Guitreau said:

Thank you for the feed back if you are able to can tact me

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about 1 month ago GuessWho said:

Hey, Dakota. Your story isn't bad and I believe you have something going here, but it's a bit dry. Also, you need to get some punctuation going. Using another book may help you, if you pay attention to how the author wrote it.