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A southern boy grows up in a harsh swampy environment and has to find a way to survive.
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about 1 month ago Dakota Guitreau said:
Thank you for the feed back if you are able to can tact me
about 1 month ago GuessWho said:
Hey, Dakota. Your story isn't bad and I believe you have something going here, but it's a bit dry. Also, you need to get some punctuation going. Using another book may help you, if you pay attention to how the author wrote it.