Merging with the Prince(The Dark)

Merging with the Prince(The Dark)

2 chapters / 858 words

Approximately 4 minutes to read

Description:

© 2017 This is my first try at fantasy so I hope you enjoy.
Book one of Merging with the Prince.

I have decided to change the direction the story was going in

Genres:

Writing, Fantasy

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9 months ago Sarah Richard said:

This is beautiful. I wanted it to be longer.Great tempo. Look it over and read it out loud. You have extra words in here that don't make sense and the grammar could be tweaked. The plot is wonderful. Adore that you say so many things without the use of exposition.

Thanks for sharing. Keep on writing. I love it.