Gone

Gone

1 chapter / 546 words

Approximately 3 minutes to read

Description:

You left... What am I supposed to do now, dear?

Genres:

Writing

Comments(11)

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about 1 year ago Melanie Rae. said:

Liked how the whole time I'm figuring out what happened and it was all simply pieced together at the end. Awesome. :3

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almost 2 years ago MarsaysRawr said:

this was so beautiful, I'm lacking words to explain the prettyness...

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over 2 years ago Eliza M. Yeager said:

This was EXCELLENT!! It was heartbreaking but I loved it. I could feel the story tellers pain...and the ending! Everything about this, to me, was great. :)

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over 2 years ago Emma E. B. said:

Ta da. Found you.

Reviews(6)

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over 1 year ago Look.it's.Kenzie. said:

This is amazing! Truly inspiring! I know what it's like to lose someone you love.. feeling like you could have done something differently. I don't have any complaints for this:)

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over 2 years ago Anna Mee said:

Such powerful emotions. You kind of just let the thoughts flow and it wasn't jumbled at all- it was smooth and felt really fluent from the start to the end. Good job, it's a powerful story and it really draws the reader into the feeling and story in general.