This was EXCELLENT!! It was heartbreaking but I loved it. I could feel the story tellers pain...and the ending! Everything about this, to me, was great. :)
This is amazing! Truly inspiring!
I know what it's like to lose someone you love.. feeling like you could have done something differently. I don't have any complaints for this:)
Such powerful emotions. You kind of just let the thoughts flow and it wasn't jumbled at all- it was smooth and felt really fluent from the start to the end. Good job, it's a powerful story and it really draws the reader into the feeling and story in general.
Comments(11)
about 1 year ago Melanie Rae. said:
Liked how the whole time I'm figuring out what happened and it was all simply pieced together at the end. Awesome. :3
almost 2 years ago MarsaysRawr said:
this was so beautiful, I'm lacking words to explain the prettyness...
over 2 years ago Eliza M. Yeager said:
This was EXCELLENT!! It was heartbreaking but I loved it. I could feel the story tellers pain...and the ending! Everything about this, to me, was great. :)
over 2 years ago Emma E. B. said:
Ta da. Found you.
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over 1 year ago Look.it's.Kenzie. said:
This is amazing! Truly inspiring! I know what it's like to lose someone you love.. feeling like you could have done something differently. I don't have any complaints for this:)
over 2 years ago Anna Mee said:
Such powerful emotions. You kind of just let the thoughts flow and it wasn't jumbled at all- it was smooth and felt really fluent from the start to the end. Good job, it's a powerful story and it really draws the reader into the feeling and story in general.