Imaginary Friend

Imaginary Friend

1 chapter / 480 words

Approximately 2 minutes to read

Description:

An imaginary friend disappears.

Cover image link: http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Forgotten_Friends

Genres:

Short Story

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about 1 month ago Kelsea Dove said:

This was a really nice idea for a short story. I think you used present tense instead of past tense at one point, but it didn't make the story difficult to read. Overall, fantastic job!

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7 months ago J.T.Loomis said:

Wow... I really don't know what to say. This is really good. It's a little short, but I suppose adding anything else would take away from it's graceful, poetic feel. I only saw one awkward sentence, which was the one where you used "trashy music" and "hottest music" at the same time. Once again, good job.