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A patriotic piece.
about 17 hours ago Annalynn Parker said:
24 days ago Angeline D. Emile said:
Sis, Your readings are gonna be immortal and full of pride for your motherland
about 1 month ago Millieron D. Emile said:
I am speechless again.
about 17 hours ago Clarinda Cary said:
In a word I loved it. The flow was great and it rhymed quite well. The only thing which seemed to be wrong is the lack of punctuation, which I think doesn't really matter in a poem. The lack or wrong use of punctuation didn't effect the piece much and it wasn't confusing at all.
Keep it up!