EVERYDAY

EVERYDAY

1 chapter / 111 words

Approximately half a minute to read

Description:

A patriotic piece.

Genres:

Writing, Poetry

Comments(4)

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about 17 hours ago Annalynn Parker said:

Quite patriotic!

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24 days ago Angeline D. Emile said:

Writings**

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24 days ago Angeline D. Emile said:

Sis, Your readings are gonna be immortal and full of pride for your motherland

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about 1 month ago Millieron D. Emile said:

I am speechless again.

Reviews(1)

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about 17 hours ago Clarinda Cary said:

In a word I loved it. The flow was great and it rhymed quite well. The only thing which seemed to be wrong is the lack of punctuation, which I think doesn't really matter in a poem. The lack or wrong use of punctuation didn't effect the piece much and it wasn't confusing at all.

Keep it up!