The Return of Magic: The Prologue

The Return of Magic: The Prologue

1 chapter / 364 words

Approximately 2 minutes to read

Description:

Amazing cover by WingsofAnEagle from the Young Author's cover shop
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Prologue or Chapter Zero of The Return of Magic as told from a second person perspective.

Genres:

Writing, Action, Fantasy

Comments(6)

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5 months ago Ada Townsend said:

And now I'm kind of paranoid that something may kill me on my next hike. JK, awesome story so far! I'm going to read the actual novel now...

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7 months ago Lauren Fricke said:

Very thrilling!

You've done a wonderful job of inputting emotion into this piece, resulting is a successful, shiver worthy piece.

I realize that this is in second POV, but to me, there are too many "you"s. Try to minimize their usage, although a few here and there are alright.

Otherwise, this is very well done!

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7 months ago Colette [Rook] said:

Really nice use of the second person technique!

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8 months ago Lyria said:

Sorry ment to put fun

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