Wyvern Prologue

Wyvern Prologue

1 chapter / 364 words

Approximately 2 minutes to read

Description:

Cover by LeChevalierRoland.
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Prologue or Chapter Zero of Wyvern as told from a second person perspective.

Genres:

Writing, Action, Fantasy

Comments(5)

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19 days ago Lauren Fricke said:

Very thrilling!

You've done a wonderful job of inputting emotion into this piece, resulting is a successful, shiver worthy piece.

I realize that this is in second POV, but to me, there are too many "you"s. Try to minimize their usage, although a few here and there are alright.

Otherwise, this is very well done!

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about 1 month ago Colette [Rook] said:

Really nice use of the second person technique!

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about 1 month ago Lyria said:

Sorry ment to put fun

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about 1 month ago Lyria said:

Fu

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