The Season Sisters

The Season Sisters

7 chapters / 1173 words

Approximately 6 minutes to read

Description:

Four sisters are haunted by evil spirits who take over their bodies but, ... who invited them? Winter is 15 and haunted by spirits most of the story. Spring is 14 and is haunted at the middle-end and end of the story. Summer is 16 and the main target of the spirits. Autumn is 13 and is huanted Slightly throughout the story and tries to save her sisters.

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25 days ago Deana Oakley Vermillion said:

Lovin' it! Keep it up!

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3 months ago Sara J. Bernhardt said:

Please read The Doll House.

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3 months ago Sara J. Bernhardt said:

Pretty good but it beeds more detail. Wirk on showing and not telling. Also your formatting is off (though that might be the site. Happens to me.) When someone speaks, it's a new paragraph.

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6 months ago Lyria said:

generalcategory id's that even related to this book??? Good story. My only suggestion is more detail and you are supposed to start a new paragraph when a new person speaks.

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about 1 month ago Bamboo_Writes said:

This is so good! Love the last chapter you just added! You NEED to make this into a series.

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6 months ago Duckwing said:

This story was very shocking