FOR THE FINAL TIME

FOR THE FINAL TIME

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This is a poem I wrote for one of my most favorite players. He's retiring from a version of the game and my feelings about this are clearly mentioned in the piece. I don't know if you call sports-addiction a type of insanity. This game means a lot to me.

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26 days ago Ian Reeve said:

I read the poem before I read the description, which was a mistake. I thought it was about being at the bedside of a loved one as they were dying. I was quite moved by it, I thought it was really well written, that you must have been really close to the dying person. Then I read the description and realised it was just about a sportsman retiring. You must have been a really great fan! I shall probably read more of your work when I have time. You've clearly got talent.

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27 days ago •Jinghay• said:

This poem really gave the sense of something final, something that won't happen again. Although I'm not particularly a fan of sports I can somewhat relate to the feeling through the emotive words you use. Well done! Really enjoyed reading it! Keep on writing! -Jinghay (for a swapsie)

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29 days ago Annalynn Parker said:

I'm a sports fan as well, so I know how it feels like :(

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about 1 month ago Millieron D. Emile said:

I can understand :-(

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