But Why Tho?

But Why Tho?

1 chapter / 104 words

Approximately half a minute to read

Description:

A poem I wrote to show the world that teenagers can be good. We sometimes ask ourselves in the middle of bad choices, 'But why though?"

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3 days ago Emma said:

This was wonderful and I really liked how it rhymed. You have a good message that you're trying to convey and I, too, sometimes wonder why teenagers my age act the way they do. Great job! :)

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10 days ago NF Kris said:

It's BEAUTIFUL! I loved the rhyming, meaning, and flow. Good job! AND lovely cover too!

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17 days ago Daniel Mawardi said:

Nice, I liked it. I like you odd (sorta unorthodox) rhyming pattern. My only criticism is that it's a bit short. I'm not looking for a ballad, I just think you might be able to explore the idea a bit more. Either way, good work! -Daniel

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18 days ago Jinghay said:

Loved this poem! It flowed really well and the cover is great too! Great job :)

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