After the Impact

After the Impact

14 chapters / 26233 words

Approximately about 2 hours to read

Description:

Sarah Washer was beaten and left for dead. This attack put her in a coma for three days, and when she wakes up she is greeted by a gorgeous detective named Tony Jacobson. Sarah can't remember anything about the attack and Tony is determined to find out what happened. As the case proceeds so do their feelings for each other. They can only hope that they will be able to catch the man that attacked Sarah and figure out what is going on before it's too late.

Genres:

Writing, Mystery, Romance

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San_diego_padres4

2 months ago Audie White said:

I read the first chapter of this story, and I'm intrigued as to where it's going. The first chapter was good, but I feel like everything was thrown out a bit quickly. I'm not usually one to read (or write) romance, but I feel like Tony just dove headfirst into his feelings for Sarah, without too much of an effort to stop it. I like the descriptive elements to the story, as I can clearly picture Sarah, as well as the room she's in. At the same time, I don't feel like there was enough describing what was happening around them. The first chapter was very dialogue heavy, and that can become tiring after a while. Anyway, that's just my two cents. I liked the story, and I might come back to read more.