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Approximately half a minute to read
a short poem
7 days ago G. Francis said:
Great poem! It was very elegant and had a nice flow that you executed well. Nice job and keep it up.
- G. Francis
9 days ago Brandon Lozano said:
This poem is amazing, I thought it was beautifully written and it had a very interesting flow through the entire thing. Check the first line in the second stanza "I'm should be I" other than that everything is perfect!
9 days ago Selena Shandi said:
This is so, so good. The content is very relatable and it magically keeps the perfect rythm throughout, despite being oddly broken up. I love this poem. Great work!!!
11 days ago Coral Vaci said:
I love this poem! It's just made so beautifully.
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