BeSomeone(poem)

BeSomeone(poem)

1 chapter / 111 words

Approximately half a minute to read

Description:

A little depressing poem about suicide.
|Jinghay|

Genres:

Writing, Poetry

Comments(4)

Midnightowolf2

2 months ago MidnightOWolf said:

Wow! There is nothing else to say. This was really good! Just.. wow! You are a great poet! Keep it up!

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3 months ago A.D. Emile {Kyron} said:

It was awesome! You described the whole thing perfectly. I just loved the flow and the way it rhymed. The last stanza was great, it was a good summary of the whole poem. In a word, great! Keep it up!

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3 months ago NF Kris said:

I feel like crying- but I'm empty of tears today- because this deserves a few weeps. Goodness this was so beautiful.

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3 months ago Hazel Gatoya said:

Ohnoes, more sad. :( You do sad really well, though.

Reviews(3)

Random girl

3 months ago Jail Rose said:

I love your poem! Behind the words is a powerful meaning. Keep up the good work!

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3 months ago Ana G. said:

(For a Swap) I really enjoyed this. There really isn't much to say, it's just so good! There weren't any grammar mistakes, and it all goes along smoothly. Keep up the good work! ∞Ana G.