Lily

Lily

1 chapter / 1693 words

Approximately 8 minutes to read

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My entry for the HP FanFiction. I hope you guys like it. c:
P.S. This is Marauders era. (:

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Comments(46)

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about 5 years ago Alicia L. said:

That was amazing! I'm not really into fanfics, but that was beautifully written and emotional. great job!

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about 5 years ago NinjaRocker said:

this is amazing but so sad. in a good way of course! i love this. you are an amazing writer!! XD

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over 5 years ago Jeeny Then said:

This makes the Harry Potter Series suck. You totally rocked the whole writing thing going!

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over 5 years ago Jeeny Then said:

This makes the Harry Potter series a piece of garbage.. You totally rock it out there!

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almost 6 years ago Jasper♬ said:

I love this! I love Harry Potter fanfics! When I read I found it really different compared to other ones that I had read. I like the way you said that Sirius is Lily's lover, not Severus.

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about 6 years ago Trina Elisabeth said:

D': This is AWESOME. When I saw it at first I thought it would be cliche, but it's just amazing. You have a wonderful take on the characters and I love the parts where he says "I love you too. I love you too," and the end when she's gone and he says he chooses her. It's just so beautiful and heartbreaking! I wish I'd seen it when the contest was going on so I could've voted. Overall, amazing job. A piece of my heart has broken for Sirius DX ^_^