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3 months ago Lauren Fricke said:

Wow. Just wow.

There are extremely few writers with the ability to captivate an audience as you do. Your descriptions, your connections to humanity and our reactions are nothing short of stunning. I doubt anyone else could make endless walking into a story as beautifully done as this.

Truly, I am impressed. I, myself, am a short story person. I can definitely appreciate the ending of this piece- brief, yet hopeful- but even I find myself wishing for it to continue! That, my friend, is the sign of a winner.

I apologize for my lack of a review. It is extremely difficult to critique your writing as it is technically flawless and creatively unparalleled.

Congratulations on your win in the contest, and PLEASE continue writing!