Big Girls Don't Cry

Big Girls Don't Cry

5 chapters / 4076 words

Approximately 20 minutes to read

Description:

A young teenager battles through depression, but when she goes to a mental hospital, she realizes that her life can change. She will be going through many challenges, but in the end everything is nothing as it used to be. And the sad thing is that it's a true story.

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Comments(1)

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8 days ago A. G. Austin said:

Hey so great job! I read chapter 1 and it was really good. It is obviious that you have a great gift of writing.

there are a few grammar/spelling mistakes that can from just reading the story aloud.

One such mistake is "Cat. Get up. Your safe, I promise." "Your"should become "you're". Shortly after this she is lying on the bed, you wrote "she lied". This means she lied to the bed, not lying on the bed.

This is a great story, you just need to fix a few mistakes. Hope this helps, -A

Reviews(5)

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14 days ago Auri said:

What stood out to me the most about this story, was the amount of depth and description the author put into this story. It felt quite real, to the point of gut-wrenching heartache for the narrator, and at times I felt brought to the point of tears. Social pressures aren't easy, and I felt that you brought attention to those rather clearly as well as show us that what others, or even ourselves, see as weaknesses are actually strengths. Thank you for sharing your story.

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14 days ago Auri said:

What stood out to me the most about this story, was the amount of depth and description the author put into this story. It felt quite real, to the point of gut-wrenching heartache for the narrator, and at times I felt brought to the point of tears. Social pressures aren't easy, and I felt that you brought attention to those rather clearly as well as show us that what others, or even ourselves, see as weaknesses are actually strengths. Thank you for sharing your story.