A Picture of Regret

A Picture of Regret

1 chapter / 448 words

Approximately 2 minutes to read

Description:

This is my submission to Summer Contest 2017 'Make it Rain' where the goal was to write a story or poem about a tear-worthy goodbye. Tell me what you think!

Genres:

Writing, Short Story

Comments(1)

Wings of an eagle profile

about 1 month ago WingsofAnEagle said:

Very emotional! Great job :-)

Reviews(1)

Wings of an eagle profile

about 1 month ago WingsofAnEagle said:

Wow,this is so good! It actually made me cry, and very few books can do that to me.

A suggestion would be to make it more clear that you are talking about a dog that is gone. It wasn't until the last sentence that I realized that it was a dog, and even then I was a bit unsure, considering there is only a very small part that shows it is a dog.

But over all, I loved this! Great job!