To My Mother

To My Mother

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I wrote this poem many many years ago when I was around 16 or was I 15? The night I wrote this poem my Step Father beat me so badly that I can't remember how long it happened. Years and Years later my mother let me know that my step dad called her after he sent me to bed to say these words to her "I think I went to far this time". So many times he tried to kill me but she continued to stay.




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6 months ago Naomi Folettia said:

I'm so glad to hear that things are better for you now. Although the poem is very simple, it is this simplicity that really hits you in the heart. Very well done.


6 months ago Haley Kissell said:

Oh my god, I am so sorry! I hope things are better for you now. This is so heartbreaking and conveys such pain. It's a wonderful poem. I hope you're ok. Good job and keep writing.

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6 months ago Coral Vaci said:

This poem is wonderfully made! I love how you worded the whole thing. I hope things are better for you now. :)


6 months ago L.Greene said:

I mean hit.


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