Lost to your love

Lost to your love

1 chapter / 281 words

Approximately 1 minute to read

Description:

Beautiful cover by A.D. Emile

Genres:

Writing, Poetry

Comments(4)

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6 days ago Lauren Fricke said:

Nicely done! The emotion is seeping out from between the lines, your passion evident!

I would challenge you to play around with capitalization and punctuation. Not every line has to be capitalized, and different types of punctuation (like semicolons and dashes) could add emphasis to your piece.

Don't get me wrong, the piece was lovely, but it's always fun to try different styles!

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8 days ago Naomi Folettia said:

A very nice, beautiful poem. I liked the image of the tears embracing the palm maybe almost pooling over because there were so many tears.

There was one part where you said "in da soil" when for the others you wrote "the" not "da". I have a feeling it's a typo?

Anyway, keep up the beautiful poetry! :D

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10 days ago Rave said:

Beautiful poem!

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11 days ago Coral Vaci said:

This poem is wonderful and sad. I like the cover by the way. :)

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