For the Love of the Sea

For the Love of the Sea

1 chapter / 54 words

Approximately less than 20 seconds to read


***A POEM***

~Lovely cover by Kayla Amaro


Writing, Romance, Poetry


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3 months ago NEF Castuera said:

I always see your work so pure and very realistic and very refreshing. I haven't like the sea that much, but as I am reading this, I feel like I'd like to venture upon some pirate books and sailor's guide because I want to sail the waters even though not personally. What I am trying to point out is that this is well written, and just as I expected your rhyming scheme is extremely enthralling! You are clever and it is evident you have wit in playing with words and phrases, I love it! Keep it up! :D


4 months ago Arabella Starr said:

It was okay, I love the sea so I chose this one to read first.


5 months ago Sage Bielinski said:

LOVED it! Great word choice and imagery!


5 months ago Kayla Amaro said:

Beautiful! Love it.


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5 months ago Naomi Folettia said:

As I was reading, I wondered what you would rhyme with "waves" and then you cleverly came up with "sailors' graves". Very clever *applauds you* Not just was the rhyming clever but the fact that it might actually be quite true. I liked how you showed the ocean as something beautiful but then told the reader, "Don't forget about its sinister side!"

I like that sort of realistic view on nature which is often portrayed as either beautiful or sinister, not both. But we need to acknowledge that the beautiful nature we love can also be dangerous. I felt this poem was showing that. Well done :D