Art Thou Fallen

Art Thou Fallen

1 chapter / 945 words

Approximately 5 minutes to read

Description:

WIP
Six months after Sparaphon's fall, and he's living in a crumbling apartment in northern Philadelphia.

At least he's never short of work; stealing souls from heaven and handing them over to whoever's willing to pay for them.

Things are just starting to look up for him when he runs into Azrael, the angel of death, who knows just enough about Sparapohn's sinful work to destroy everything he's rebuilt. That is, unless Sparaphon can help with accessing the vaults of heaven to retrieve a soul that should never have been put there. A soul that poses a threat to the entire of God's kingdom.

Comments(5)

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13 days ago Joshua Troy Sulentic said:

Needs a bit more of a look into capitalization and understanding of what angles are and how all of this works. I realize this is not a Christian book, but I am one and can see what is wrong with this, as can anyone who has read this stuff. If you want some help, I'm more than willing to help you with the Biblical accuracy. And when you're talking about Jesus or any other member of the Divine Trinity, it's Lord, or He, or whatever. Capitalize when you are talking indirectly about a Catholic/Christian/Arab God (God, Jesus, Allah) (He, Him, His, etc...), and lowercase when you are indirectly about a mythical god (Zeus, Loki, Athena) (he, she, him, her, etc...).

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19 days ago Leah M said:

Hell yeah

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26 days ago Kayla Howard said:

You have one grammar thing where you said moment instead of moments, but the story is very intriguing so far.

Capture logu nice

28 days ago Alexander said:

cool whens part 2

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