The Return of Magic

The Return of Magic

22 chapters / 29257 words

Approximately about 2 hours to read

Description:

A thousand years ago, all creatures and beings of magic were driven out of Alibian at the end of the Last War of Magic. They were forgotten over the centuries until a curse sets in motion events that may bring the long-lost magic back into the world
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First/rough draft of a high fantasy novel
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Book one of a series
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Cover by Mercury Winters

Genres:

Adventure, Fantasy, Novel

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27 days ago Reiga said:

That's all your gonna put? Do the two characters die? 0^0 I'm sorry I can't really do a review because I didn't spot anything wrong lol^^ The only thing that kinda confused me would be that I've never read a book with quite the perspective u have on yours :D But that's not a problem that is just my inexperience

Anyway have u found a publisher yet? Or are u getting close? That would be cool if u could publish your own book^^ Good luck! And keep up the good writing! XD

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27 days ago Ian Reeve said:

Best of luck with this story! I'm doing something very similar with 'The Sceptre of Samnos'. I published the first chapter on figment to get some feedback and comments, but am keeping the rest back for the same reasons as yourself. Maybe we should collaborate on a joint project one day.

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27 days ago Light in the Dark said:

D***! That's cold! But I see your reasoning.

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27 days ago Eowyn Doyle said:

I didn't write this for the likes or comment or even reviews, though I do love and appreciate them. If you read this before I removed/re-added it, you can re-heart/react to it.

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27 days ago Eowyn Doyle said:

Everyone who liked and wrote reviews on it before, THANK YOU SO VERY MUCH!!! I LOVE YOU ALL AND APPRECIATE YOU SO MUCH!!! I COULDN'T HAVE MADE IT THIS FAR WITHOUT YOU!!!

I will take all your advice and critiques into account as I continue to write and improve this story. It was easier for me just to remove the book and re-add all the chapters like this than one at a time deleting/re-adding within the same book. (if only there was a way to un-publish a chapter without so much trouble)