8 chapters / 14146 words

Approximately about 1 hour to read


Please help me, I'm dying. Save me, I'm falling. They tell me I won't survive. Please catch me, because if you don't, I'll shatter. I can't grab on anymore, I can't keep fighting. It's going to swallow me up.

My name is Alyssa Gray, and by the time you finish reading this, I'll be dead.


Religious, Romance, Drama



17 days ago WingsofAnEagle said:

Woah.. this is stunning, moving, powerful-- words fail to describe my reaction to the first chapter. Having been a close relation to someone who had struggled with cancer only makes this more impacting for me. I'm looking forward to getting better acquianted with ur MC and reading further into this story.


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25 days ago C. Van Asch (Chesster) said:

lol. My review has a typo. I meant, Work not Wok.


It's not have a relationship

4 days ago Spiritual Central (Chesster) said:

Chapter 5:

I will start off saying that I didn't see any grammar mistakes!


I feel so sad for Alyssa but I'm now like wow she is shutting her Mom off from her. She going to lock herself in that room where she won't get anything done until she makes that first step to come out of her room. Because hiding doesn't make the situation go away. I feel sad that the mother is so cold I mean she is trying to affection but failing.

Your description is still strong, how long have you been writing?

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12 days ago C. Van Asch (Chesster) said:

Chapter 4:

Wow, that was one mean conversation Alyssa had with her mother. I'll say it again I like how you end each chapter. Well, I didn't see any typos good story so far.