My Claim to Fame

My Claim to Fame

1 chapter / 554 words

Approximately 3 minutes to read

Genres:

Writing

Comments

There aren't any comments just yet. You should be the first to .

Reviews(1)

Milky way rising over white sand nm-900ap

26 days ago Chelsea Waters said:

Beautiful! The descriptions in this are so vivid and so hooking, you really draw me in and make me feel like I'm right there. I feel the emotions really deeply, your desperation, the crushing sorrow, the way you just keep on fighting. I admire that a lot. Your writing captivates me, the way you talk about fighting to be someone, to be recognized. There are a few words hear that sound kind of unnatural, so I would recommend going back through it and maybe reading it out loud. If any words seem odd or out of place, maybe you need to find a better way to say it.