Confessions Of An "Evil" Queen

Confessions Of An "Evil" Queen

2 chapters / 1847 words

Approximately 9 minutes to read

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Leyardra was the brand-new queen of the kingdom of Upper Landria. Was. There has been a slighty troublesome event that has come between her and her throne, involving a large rusty broadsword and great quantities of wine. In not so many words: she has just killed her husband, the unpleasant King Toggary. And now Leyardra is on the run...

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almost 5 years ago c said:

Hearted! If you would like to swap please read/heart my story “Ella and Sam were here.” Thanks!

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over 5 years ago Tabbatha Barns said:

This is really goood so far, I can't wait for the rest! It has a solid plot, and if you would go through and fix some of the grammar and spelling, it would improve it greatly

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about 6 years ago Lynne Delaine said:

Interesting. Hey, if no one's told you yet, you have a bunch of misspellings (but most of them are b/c they're homophones (they sound the same)). Just an example, you said "of coarse," but that "coarse" means "rough." You mean "of course."

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about 6 years ago skye Kerr said:

This is very good! i loved how your plot flowed easily keep up the good work!

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over 6 years ago Rachel Hera said:

This was good. There were a few spelling mistakes, "coarse/course", etc, but the characters voice is boisterous and fun (even if I found it to be a tad bit unnatural), which almost makes up for it :P Some of the paragraphs tended to get quite a bit chunky, but otherwise they were fine.

Are you going to continue it? If so, I would love to see more. Great job!