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Approximately about 1 hour to read
© 2011 Kaitlyn Watson
this was my entry for the Plash Photo contest.
over 4 years ago Saterlais Pendragon said:
I can't wait to see what happens next, and I hope nothing bad befalls the coachman. (sorry I'd but his name, but I'd prolly masacre it xD). Keep up the good work Kaitlyn!
almost 5 years ago Emillia Gryphon said:
Wonderous as always!
almost 5 years ago Saterlais Pendragon said:
:) Cute. ^-^
This is great! I love your wording for it and the characters are also very lovible! Is the term, "Hand of Sorrow" in refferance to the song by Within Temptation?
over 5 years ago Smoke Or Tea said:
Interesting story. I like the writing style used. It reflects the storytelling often found in works by Hans Christian Anderson.
There were minor punctuation errors, but the story flowed nicely. I'd like to see more. One, because I enjoyed what was there and would like to read more. And two, because I feel you left some matters unresolved.
Merci de partager votre imagination!
over 5 years ago Cora Parks said:
This is truly amazing. I have always been able to review a written work but this truly has left me speachless. I can only beg that the author continues this as fast as possible because I plan to check on this daily. Also I would like for you to join my figment group page "Just Write Something!!!!!" and as an incentive I know a publisher who, if you can finish this book, would im sure love to read this and try to get you published depending on how well written the finished product is. Please feel welcome to post a comment on my home figment page under "cora parks" and I will get back to you as soon as possible. Thank you and I hope to hear from you soon.