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Written somewhere between 4/8/10, and May 30th 2010. I really don't remember why I wrote it.
almost 2 years ago Lahevet said:
I like it :)
Though note the spelling error: "liveley" should be lively.
almost 2 years ago Gabriella Gamez said:
I like the first stanza (:
almost 2 years ago Beni Dieujuste said:
This was a nicely written poem, which I enjoyed greatly but I'm not sure if the word "Fast" can be used as a describing word for salsa.
Maybe change the word or compare it to another thing other then salsa?
Those are just my thoughts.