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Festive Life and Calming Death
1 chapter / 44 words
Approximately less than 20 seconds to read
Description:
Written somewhere between 4/8/10, and May 30th 2010. I really don't remember why I wrote it.
Comments(2)
over 1 year ago Lahevet said:
I like it :) Though note the spelling error: "liveley" should be lively.
Cheers.
over 1 year ago Gabriella Gamez said:
I like the first stanza (:
Reviews(1)
over 1 year ago Beni Dieujuste said:
This was a nicely written poem, which I enjoyed greatly but I'm not sure if the word "Fast" can be used as a describing word for salsa. Maybe change the word or compare it to another thing other then salsa? Those are just my thoughts. Very good!:)