Festive Life and Calming Death

Festive Life and Calming Death

1 chapter / 44 words

Approximately less than 20 seconds to read

Description:

Written somewhere between 4/8/10, and May 30th 2010. I really don't remember why I wrote it.

Genres:

Poetry

Comments(2)

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almost 3 years ago Lahevet said:

I like it :) Though note the spelling error: "liveley" should be lively.

Cheers.

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almost 3 years ago Gabriella Gamez said:

I like the first stanza (:

Reviews(1)

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almost 3 years ago Beni Dieujuste said:

This was a nicely written poem, which I enjoyed greatly but I'm not sure if the word "Fast" can be used as a describing word for salsa. Maybe change the word or compare it to another thing other then salsa? Those are just my thoughts. Very good!:)