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PICK ME PICK ME PICK ME. YA JUST ONE CLICK. PICK ME. A small poem I just thought of.
Please let me know of any issues with it or things I could fix
almost 4 years ago Ibelin said:
I feel like this sometimes. I'm no kind of poet and so totally unqualified to critique poetry, but I identify with the poem. The poem makes me feel. That's good, right?
almost 4 years ago Michael D. Waterhouse said:
Very nice- unusual thinking :)
almost 4 years ago Emily Anne said:
Good. I don't quite understand it though. Who is this person talking about? A boyfriend?
almost 4 years ago Monika said:
I really enjoyed this. Especially since I can relate to most of it.
over 2 years ago Angela Frank said:
Omg, I love this!
It's sad, beautiful, relatable, and A SERIOUS POEM THAT RYHMES!!!!!! This is perfection :D
over 3 years ago Clare McCullough said:
I am in love. This piece is so pure and honest. It says what we all are too afraid to say (though its with good reason. :) Keep putting these poems on here!!