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A Living Nightmare
1 chapter / 677 words
Approximately 3 minutes to read
Description:
"He was nothing but shadow. Eyeless, mouth-less. Nothing but a shadow of a man, and something much more terrible. The shadows were moving, in and out, screaming silent screams for help. They swirled, thickening and thinning. And yet the silhouette itself was still, as if nothing more than just a shadow. The first words I was able to think: a living nightmare." *Was for the Underground Contest*
Comments(5)
over 1 year ago Azalia Shire said:
This is intense and your detailing makes it both scary and well-written. Love this, please continue!
over 1 year ago Ronnie Taleon said:
I just have to say that the screams in the beginning were beautifully written out and intense! I also really like how you described the basement, but on the other hand, I felt like your story started out powerful, fell flat in the middle, and rose back up to powerful in the end. I don't know, maybe that's just me. Anyway, great entry! XD
over 1 year ago Mei Below said:
WOAH That was so cool, I didnt read all of it before my first comment. But WOAH. Also, nice job on the perfect grammar.
over 1 year ago Mei Below said:
Beginning=INTENSE!!! O.O
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