River

River

1 chapter / 101 words

Approximately half a minute to read

Description:

River

Genres:

Poetry

Comments(8)

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over 4 years ago Laurie Elizabeth Bohne said:

Thank you all very much. I am glad you enjoyed it!

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over 4 years ago Ruby Skye said:

Wow this was beautifully poetic with lovely images. I really enjoyed reading it.

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over 6 years ago Laurie Elizabeth Bohne said:

Thank you so so much :)

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over 6 years ago Emma Kean said:

I love this it is sooooooooooooo good!!!!

Reviews(1)

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over 4 years ago DecemberRayne said:

I enjoyed (extremely) the imagery and wording. Use more punctuation! It will help the reader follow through the poem with more intensity that the situation described calls for. Favorite line: "[Not knowing] Who to hold with these broken arms and legs" Keep at it! I am going to read more from you. I enjoy your writing.