11 months ago Emillia Gryphon said:

AAAHHH!! "We are a family surviving together yay! Safe cave, fire burning..AAHH!" So sad! Please continue, damn your ability to make readers fall in love with characters in an instant! Very well written! Double check over your capitilizations of words I think there was one sentence in there that didn't start with a capitol. Other than that this story was great, flawless! Up date soon!!

about 1 year ago Carolina Garza said:

I think you should really elaborate on this. It's really good and reminds me of Maximum Ride. I would absolutely love to read more. Good job!

over 1 year ago Bright Sprite said:

Is that the end?! Please don't let it be the end! That was soo sad I want to hear more! PLEASE!!!!

over 1 year ago Claire S. said:

This is a fantastic and original idea. I love gargoyles, and I like the idea that gargoyles are half-human and half-dragon. The story could have used a lot more editing, though--there were multiple grammar mistakes and typos. Keep working on it, and good luck in the contest!