The Lily

The Lily

1 chapter / 494 words

Approximately 2 minutes to read

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Calla has found the perfect guy, but their love isn't like what she thought it would be. This story is for all of the girls who have had to gather their strength and come out of an abusive relationship unbroken.

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over 5 years ago Jasmin Williams said:

This story is written very well. So moving. 5/5 = full heart!

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almost 6 years ago Sarah Irene said:

Thank you so much to all who have taken the time to read my piece! I truly appreciate it. :)

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almost 6 years ago . said:

it was a very powerful piece, great job! good luck in the contest!

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about 5 years ago Jenia. said:

Very powerfull piece, and realistic. I had a friend in simular situation and it reminded me of that. The way you potrayed the emotions in this story, felt so powefull and it made me imagine what Calla was going through.I'm hoping that you will possibly continue this story. I'm curious of what would happen next. I think adding more of backstory for Mason, to help us see why he is the way he is, if something happened with him in childhood to make him violent. The story hooked me from the begnning. Great job. Keep writing.