1 chapter / 473 words

Approximately 2 minutes to read


This won Seventeen Magazine and Scholastic's 2011 Fiction Contest!!! Thanks so much to those who voted!!!! Cover image courtesy of


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almost 5 years ago Rose said:

I remember reading this in seventeen! This is great, I love the imagery used here. If you could, please read my story "Little Flower". Thanks!


almost 5 years ago Monster Lady said:

This is really Good! I would absolutely love to see this extended one day.

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almost 5 years ago Shinobu Riddle said:

Wow- just WOW. That was amazing! I'm really liking that whole two sides perspective thing. That's pretty cool that you won. You deserved it. :)


almost 5 years ago Alexis Bradley said:

Wow I can definitely see how you won. This is amazing.


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over 5 years ago Tate Thurgood (KONY 2012) said:

Woah. That's all I can say. This story is absolutely perfect, millions and millions and trillions times better than anything I could ever write in my wildest dreams. This definitely deserved a win in the Seventeen contest!



over 5 years ago Alex Epicness said:

This is an amazing story! I love how you used both perspectives and how you related it all around a glass window, it's easy to relate to and I'm so very glad you did indeed win, because with a piece like this, and a gift of writing like yours; you deserved to win!