Elements (by surprise)

Elements (by surprise)

8 chapters / 3529 words

Approximately 18 minutes to read

Description:

six girls discover their uniqueness that is greater than what anyone would think of. (Cover done by Paige O'hara)

Comments(25)

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almost 5 years ago ame~chan said:

Awesome! I loved the story, but couldn't help but notice some misspelled words and the wrond words in some places. Other than that it was awesome!

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over 5 years ago kitty cat said:

happy happpy happpy happppy happppy happppy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! wright more and check you email

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over 5 years ago Little Bird Radost said:

Need ... more... wright... more...

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over 5 years ago kitty cat said:

I will never stop bugging you to wrigt more of this never muahahaha

Reviews(4)

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over 5 years ago Anjaline Bradfield said:

I really enjoyed the story, and I can't wait to read more. Just a tip, maybe make Araceli's eyes a lighter color, because you said they were darker than I would've thought. Also, maybe check the spelling and grammar. I loved the humor in it, and the air of mystery.

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almost 6 years ago Little Bird Radost said:

I love the story, but I'm still waiting for the last chapter. You're doing great.