Morning Coffee

Morning Coffee

1 chapter / 356 words

Approximately 2 minutes to read

Description:

This is what I wrote on a napkin one morning at breakfast. Could use more work

Genres:

Writing, Poetry

Comments(9)

Anime meowka

over 4 years ago JOANNA CHENG said:

It makes me crave for coffee!!!!

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about 6 years ago Caitlynn Camille said:

I love this!! This is exactly how I feel when I have my coffee in the morning; that one comforting cup gets me through the day. I like how you compared the blizzard outside to a battlefield; the onomatopoeia was employed nicely as well! Brilliant work, great job.

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over 6 years ago Angela Richart said:

I love the imagery here and the reference to fighting and bootcamp. Nicely done!! *thumbs up*

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almost 7 years ago Emma G. said:

i love it so much

Reviews(3)

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over 6 years ago Abi Judge said:

I loved the "slurp" and "gulp" - this was one of the best short stories I've ever seen, because it's really fresh and unpretentious, and you're not trying to do anything dramatic with it or overwork it. I LOVE this, keep up the writing!

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almost 7 years ago Emma G. said:

I think that is amazing there is nothing that you should change abot it i think that using "Slurp" and "Gulp" really add to the story. WRITE ON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!