True Cliché Love

True Cliché Love

1 chapter / 483 words

Approximately 2 minutes to read

Description:

My old, failed entry for the cliche contest. It's supposed to be funny. But this is just a random parody my sleep-deprived brain created.
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Note: I realize the story is cliche. I did this purposefully because that is the point. To mock over-used cliches in romance. All thoughts and comments/reviews are appreciated.

Comments(10)

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almost 5 years ago A said:

The freckles part was probably my fave and I loved the random chain of events set of by a fly lol xD

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about 5 years ago Sayjay said:

And you're right- freckles are funny :D

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about 5 years ago Sayjay said:

Oh my god... This is just HILARIOUS!!!!!!!! Dying of laughing!(Sayjay)

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almost 6 years ago Ahlorha Brooks said:

Hahahahahah!!!!! He has..... (dramatic pause)..... FRECKLES!!! hahahah sorry I thought that was hilarious.... amazing job :)

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almost 5 years ago Kristean Craighead said:

I enjoyed this. I see the sarcasm and and cliche in it. I found it very funny:) keep up the good work. you have an excellent voice for writing so don't give up.

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almost 5 years ago John Winthrop said:

Honestly, I just found this kind of immature. The misdirect with the freckles, the chain of unlikely events, and the abrupt ending of "he died. LULZ." all sound like something a fourth-grader would scribble in the margins of their notebook. The humor was unfunny to the point of being cliche- shit, that was the point, wasn't it?

I guess it's better than I thought at first.