The Skeleton Tree of Fall

The Skeleton Tree of Fall

1 chapter / 190 words

Approximately less than a minute to read


©2011 Poem about the loss of love


Writing, Romance, Poetry


Marshmallow perfection

over 5 years ago Chocoholic! said:

You literally just made me cry! The flow was flawless, the imagery perfect, the emotions breath taking! This is perfection in poetry form!

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almost 6 years ago Cerpcake said:

My imagination is following perfectly!


almost 6 years ago Lexi 21 said:

Wow. Very deep I like it


almost 6 years ago JuneSparrow said:

I love the imagery!! Especially when you describe the leaves :)


Jumping on blue!

almost 6 years ago Helen.B said:

I really like this, on the whole. It is very moving and touching. The imagery is great. However I don't like the line after This place held joy and love (But sadly now that is all gone)it just seems a little bit weak, if you know what I mean. I think I'd be more than sad if this person I loved with all my heart died. Sad doesn't seem to capture the emotion that's in the rest of the poem. Other than that though, I loved it! :)