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over 4 years ago Aviline said:

Wow. This is interesting. Wow. Congrats on being on the homepage.

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over 4 years ago Lucy S. Walker said:

please read my new book "A Poem a Day in the Month of May" and comment or like and i will return the favor!

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over 4 years ago Linda Dionne said:

This was a great story and it flowed nicely. Not too long, not too short. I especially liked the part where you slowed time down when he was holding the pink cardigan. You do an very good job showing, not telling, the reader what is happening. I really liked this. Nice job!

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almost 6 years ago Victoria Caslon said:

Wow, this story has one of the most vivid action scenes on Figment! You definitely have a way with words :) The ending was really sweet too.

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