School, Work, and Zombies?

School, Work, and Zombies?

3 chapters / 2516 words

Approximately 13 minutes to read

Description:

*Editing - Bare with me here!* --- Carmen was given the short end of the stick when her friend Jake suddenly died from a zombie attack. Now stuck with her young boss, Xavier, they have to survive the apocolypse without killing each other. Will Xavier suddenly discover his unknown feelings for Carmen? Will they find the cure to this awful new disease? Read and find out!

Genres:

Action, Romance, Novel
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Comments(38)

Trin_aster_pro

almost 2 years ago Trin Aster said:

Also, I feel as if you use her name, Carmen, a little to much, it starts getting a little repetitive.

Trin_aster_pro

almost 2 years ago Trin Aster said:

On the first chapter, when the teacher takes her notebook, you say: Through, instead of threw.

Otherwise this was so good, and funny and sad, and made, me myself want to blush at times. Good job!

Think-outside-the-box

over 4 years ago **S.S.** said:

Hi I really like what you have so far. Can you please post on my wall when you update some more chapters? Thanks tons, and great job with the 1st chapter!!! :)

Thought cloud-cropped

over 4 years ago Renae Walker said:

I read the first chapter of this and I can't wait to read to read it all when you post it up again! Please hurry though!

Reviews(9)

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about 5 years ago Malice Alina said:

I stopped at chapter 4. I honestly feel like towards the ending of chapter 2 it was somewhat rushed. Her best friend just died and I feel like it needed more emotion. And once chapter 2 was over, I was looking forward to how she would cope, but you skipped after a couple months have passed right after and I think the right time to have done that would be after a couple of days of her being trapped and deep in some sort of depression from her best friends death.

Which would have lead to the readers of possible relations with Carmen and Xavier, because it seemed so out of nowhere that he became attracted to her. And if you were to have written that she had been trapped for a couple of days, it would have been easier to follow his feelings toward Carmen. Also, I think it would have been good to have added her being frantic about her family's safety, would have been a lot more realistic.

I did enjoy that you had Xavier list reasons why he's attracted to Carmen within his own thoughts. I was kind of confused of where they received guns though.

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about 5 years ago Malice Alina said:

Ooh, this seems totally worth while and cool. :) I found your story on a paranormal romance group today and the title had me clicking your story first. :) Btw, I made a discussion on that group called "No SWAPPING, just free will." and it's part of the reason why I'm commenting on your story. So I hope you find time to read that.

Anyway, your story will certainly be on my book list. Your story is easy to follow, easy descriptions, but I really like that Carmen's talent is drawing. Besides Carmen feeling like she's in the drawings that she sketches, she also has me feeling like I'm there too. :) So that's really interesting to feel from a story, something new for me. And I find it cool that Carmen is actually a friend of yours in real life, it reminds me of one of my story's that I write about with like 12 of my real friends and of me and my fiance, lol, who was only my friend when I began writing the story.

I gotta' say though, before I had this zombie slayer zombie dream a month ago, I wouldn't be here leaving this comment because I USED to rather watch than read about anything to do with zombies, but that's changed. Especially since I plan to make that dream come true, like my other story. Anyway, I can't wait to read more!