On A School Night

On A School Night

6 chapters / 4838 words

Approximately 24 minutes to read

Description:

Evelyn Blair is a senior at DuPonte High School in California and she wants to end this year with a bang, a real bang...and if that means starting an affair with the hot teacher, then so be it...but can she avoid the repercussions that may come back to haunt her if she gets caught?

Genres:

Drama, Romance, Novel

Comments(22)

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almost 5 years ago c said:

Hearted! If you would like to swap please read/heart my story “Ella and Sam were here.” Thanks!

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about 5 years ago Lauren Harden said:

thanks for all the comments and reviews! It's still a work in progress, but I will let you all know when more chapters have been added or when I go back and edit!!

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about 5 years ago Abby A said:

OMG I love this story!! So much suspense, I need more!

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about 5 years ago JustBeingAshlee said:

I think this is a great story idea that just needs some fine tuning work and.. well length! haha. If you add more plot to the story and really get the reader entwined with the story between the two, perhaps throw in a second love interest her age, and BAM! You've got the reader hooked. Try to find more ways to add depth to the story because that will make the romantic scenes that much more powerful! You don't want to end up writing a sequel to 50 Shades of Grey here! (: Overall great idea and descriptive work. Good character traits too. Can't wait to see how the story develops! -JustBeingAshlee

Reviews(5)

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over 4 years ago Evelyn Jackson said:

She needs friends, she seems kinda lonely. Her parents seem non-existant. Maybe you should throw in another love interest her age like her best friend since third grade or something.

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over 4 years ago Evelyn Jackson said:

I love it! I have a weak spot for student-teacher affairs and I don't know why.

Still I wanna know what happens next. tee hee, I love how it gets straight to the point.