Second Place in After Obsession Contest. "Welcome to Lucky Circus! Introducing two of Lucky Circus's uprising stars: Odette, the circus's veteran and youngest top performer, and Evelyn aka Lynn, the circus's newest runaway and addition, also Odette's top rival." *Cover is compliments of brookie.*
This is great! I love your detail and the words you used. Although I do wish you would've explained Evelyn's story about her life before the Lucky Circus and how she got there. I was also a little confused as to what was actually happening in the italicized part. But other than that, I loved it :)
Comments(45)
about 1 year ago madonna Enwe said:
you are really good
over 1 year ago Hannah Ellery-Ashby said:
Interesting.
over 1 year ago Ariella Backman said:
Really liked this one! The flow was nice, and the descriptions were very good to.
over 1 year ago Janelle Star said:
Very beautifully written. Sounds like it could be a very interesting story if you continue.
Reviews(2)
about 1 year ago Abbey said:
This is amazing! I love it!
over 1 year ago Miranda Foley said:
This is great! I love your detail and the words you used. Although I do wish you would've explained Evelyn's story about her life before the Lucky Circus and how she got there. I was also a little confused as to what was actually happening in the italicized part. But other than that, I loved it :)