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Snapped then unsnapped. Ripped then taped. Broken then mended. This is what happened to me.
almost 5 years ago Rachie said:
THAT WAS AMAZING!!! Nothing like I have ever seen before! Great ideas! Thank you!
almost 5 years ago Savannah Patterson said:
This is absolutely brilliant. I love the way you piece it together, giving both sides of the story. Choppy, but still flowing well. Absolutely phenomenal.
about 5 years ago Luquas said:
Wow I loved it! It was great how intense it was and how it kept switching! You have real potential!
about 5 years ago Jana Wilde said:
Provocative and complex! You really captured the characters feelings so well. I loved it.
almost 6 years ago Caroline said:
Love when you compared her to a hunter, still hungry, and unsatisfied. It adds this gory edge and bitterness that is an absolutely amazing perspective for the guy.
about 6 years ago SridevaS13 said:
Very emotionally awakening.
I saw 2 tiny grammar errors, nothing huge.
let's should be lets, and i was taught to never put "but" at the start of the sentence.
That's about it :)
You did a great job, although the back-and forth narration confused me at first, I caught up :)