Unspoken Love

Unspoken Love

1 chapter / 1441 words

Approximately 7 minutes to read


FINALIST IN THE SPARKS CONTEST. Tragedy opens the door of unspoken love as best friends find the courage to change a little girl's world.

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5 months ago Alecia Walls said:

Really great story, even tough it was short, you could really understand the characters feelings towards each other.



about 2 years ago Artemis J. Potter said:

Aw, I really loved this story! Even though it was short, I felt like I could really feel the chemistry between Matthew and Janie. The whole dynamic with Maya just made everything sweeter :)

One thing I wanted to add was that sometimes Matthew seemed too perceptive of Janie’s feelings. Like here: “We sat in silence too long, hungry to hear the words we kept hidden.” But then again, they have been friends for so long, so I guess it wouldn’t be much of a stretch that they could practically read each other’s thoughts.

Also, there were some tiny grammatical errors in a few places. “I hugged her not meeting her eyes”—there should be a comma after “her”. But there weren't that many.

Overall, I really enjoyed this. I don't consider myself much of a romance reader, but when the chemistry's right and the love is truly deep (who that sounds cheesy), I really love it.


over 2 years ago Huda A. said:

Such a romantic soul , next time make it longer and keep writing from your heart .