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Top 5 (winner)the NY Times contest. Thank you, hearters!!
A girl is riding solo on a train, observing different characters, and meets one she likes. A lot.
almost 2 years ago Roses Aren't Red said:
The character's voice just seemed to make this story perfect. And everything about it makes me chuckle a bit. Good Job!;D
almost 2 years ago Lily Grace said:
I, once again, really like your descriptions. I could clearly see the subway train moving along towards NYC. I could also see the people. Very good. :)
almost 2 years ago Theresa Rose said:
I really liked it, I thought how you wrote it was great and I could see everything unfolding in my mind's eye, really, really good! Funny enough, I do that when I'm out too, trying to fit the person with an identity. Really well done! :)
almost 2 years ago Bijou Lee said:
Love the voice and description. Great job, keep it up!
almost 2 years ago L. E. Kat said:
I must say, this is one of my favorites of your stories. I loved the way she perceived the people. The staring part made me laugh.
almost 2 years ago loveena said:
OMG! I love the way it is written it flowed beautifully and the reality is so nice and congrats btw, it is really a champion. Its so nice and flowing.